Colour:blue Sapphire sparkles in the night. The blue dress glints on its hanger. The glass slippers shine. My blue glasses await school tomorrow. The blue raspberry taste the best. The blue slipper warms me up. The sleeping gown does its job. My blue bells smell the great. The blue moon shimmers on the rivers. By Emma sturgeon.
High Ropes At Wainui CAMP!!!!!!! As I stand there, the poles tower over me I feel like a helpless blob.The high ropes,one of the highest places at camp.As I reached for my helmet,Dale began checking our harness and helmets.When he's done he tells us about the safety stuff.Then he said to get into groups and get started!!!!!!!!
I was second to climb.Inside I was bubbling with nervousness as I reach for the clip my body began shaking. I started climbing, I was now breathing like a pig. When I reached the top of the ladder I said to myself that I was done. Finally when I reach the ground my heart stopped drumming. I looked back up. I found myself feeling sad because I thought I could have done much much better. By:Emma
The blue water gleams in the moonlight as I jump into the cool saffron surface. As the water washes around me, the river pulls me along my nightlight swim. Sometimes she would take me down to the bottom of the river and then straight up again or stay under the water for a long long time. After a about an hour she would get out and take me off and get changed. When she got home she would put me in a washing machine that went around and around it was my favourite time of the day!! In my writing I have used: Strong verbs Show me,don't tell Wow words Goals: Using detail Language features